Wednesday, July 10, 2013

EARTHQUAKE

EARTHQUAKE

Today we had an EARTHQUAKE it was a bit scary.The EARTHQUAKE happened when we were doing maths with the beans. Dylan and me dived under the table then Mr Severinsen said to go outside and line up. Then we walked over to the courts and stat down and waited and waited until we could go back to class and have brain food.        

4 comments:

  1. Excellent work Ollie but you forgot to take out the t.Cool work Ollie!

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  2. Great Ollie you writing has really gone better. I loved the part when you said that you dived under the table with that part was funny keep up the great work. Well done!!!

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  3. Wow Ollie!
    What a great recount of the earthquake,
    theres some mistakes in the story but you'll find it.
    Keep up the good work!

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  4. Wow Ollie! Fantastic describing to the reader about the earthquake, did you get scared at all? I got a fright because I wasn't sure what was happening!

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