Thursday, June 20, 2013

kiwi creche



We arrive at the kiwi creche we walked into the shelter. We sat down I said to Ben what is in the box Ben. Ben said “it’s a Kiwi!”. She  carefully took it out over the box. She walked quietly around. We got to pat carefully and quietly. I said to Ben the kiwi feathers were rough. Then we hop into our cars and vans and drive to camp.

8 comments:

  1. Awesome explaining Ollie!
    I love how you said that the feathers felt rough.
    Well done:-)

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  2. Wow I can really imagine it. Well done on describing.

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  3. Amazing that is what I like what is in the box I am amazed you must of imagined something good keep up & do not stop blogging good work. Bye see you later. :)

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  4. Wow ollie I can really imagine it. Well done on describing your writing and hope you do lots of work at school.

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  5. Cool Job the really great. I think you were amazed.Keep the work up Ollie!!!

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  6. Cool Job Ollie. I liked your touching it.

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  7. Wow written Ollie I love how you described what the Kiwi felt like.
    Keep it up!

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