Thursday, April 04, 2013

poem





I made a poem about a tiger . I made my poem on vocaroo.





TIGER
Tiger
still and stripy
pouncing on its prey
camouflaging cat
walking through the water
sleeping on the soft ground
tiger.

10 comments:

  1. You wrote a great poem, Ollie. You used ideas from your reading well. Your recording sounds good!

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  2. Awesome Poem Ollie.
    What great use of alteration.
    Nice and clear recording!
    Well done:-)

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  3. Awesome Poem Ollie you did so well writing that poem

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  4. Great job on the poem and the ending is just like the turtle poem Mr Moriarty read to us. Keep up the good work.

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  5. Wow cool poem I like the load and clear recording.
    Well done.
    from Olivia

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  6. wow cool poem it is lould recoding .
    grate job.
    from nikitah.

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  7. Amazing Ollie love it tiggers are my favorite animal!

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  8. "Good job Ollie wow I am amazed by that great fantastic work great work bye see you later".

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  9. WOW Ollie the poem is great.It has a lot of ideas about the tiger.
    well done. :-)

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